Howdy~ Dog Momma here. Wanting to tell you about my new non-dog related hobby. I started writing articles for Untapped Cities, an online magazine. Want to read what I’ve been up to? Take a look. Hey, it can’t all be about the dogs all the time, can it?
Oh, maybe you are saying it should! Ok, get your fix…
Seriously folks, if you wouldn’t mind, give an article a read through and let me know your thoughts. I have been looking for some feedback regarding my writing and would love some constructive (read: be gentle) criticism. Thanks!
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Jul 21, 2013 @ 06:45:29
We could not get your post yesterday as it kept coming up with a 404 error. Anyway all OK today. Great article. Have a serene Sunday.
Best wishes Molly
Jul 21, 2013 @ 07:00:54
Hiya Molly! Thanks for letting us know. We had a little problem posting yesterday but glad it came up ok today. Have a great Sunday!
Jul 21, 2013 @ 17:13:03
Same here!
Jul 21, 2013 @ 07:15:54
My mom wants to write an article for a magazine that is non pet as well, but she just hasn’t got the time to do it. Good for your mom!
Jul 21, 2013 @ 07:34:33
Great for your Mom!!! I read the first page and it is great!! 🙂
Jul 21, 2013 @ 08:23:08
I’m going to go read right now. I assume a dog opinion will be OK.
Blessings,
Goose
Jul 21, 2013 @ 08:28:02
OH MY DOGS FINN AND CHARLEY. YOUR MOM IS A MOST TALENTED WRITER…OF COURSE WRITING FOR YOU TEO IS WHERE SHE FINE TUNED HER SKILLS. MOL MOL MOL
BRAVO
HUGS
MAFI YOUR BFFF
Jul 21, 2013 @ 08:29:12
Madi not MAFI
Mom had a finger malfunction
Jul 21, 2013 @ 08:57:10
I like it – I never thought that “the big apple ” has so nice places. Compliments to your Momma – it’s a fabulous article what makes me curious to discover this place.
Jul 21, 2013 @ 09:26:09
We LIKED your mom’s magazine article…. butt we think that acre would be BETTER if there were DOGS there enjoying it also. Just sayin.
Jul 21, 2013 @ 09:48:25
Awesome post – well written and gave a great history of that little hidden treasure.
Jul 21, 2013 @ 11:55:15
Nice article! It was crisp and informative with flow!
Jul 21, 2013 @ 12:44:12
Wally & Sammy here…FINN! CHUCK! YOUR MOM IS CHEATING ON YOU!!!!
*AHEM* move over boys…Hi Marianne, Robyn here – I loved your article and loved learning a little more about you! Please do keep us posted on new articles. Well done you!
Jul 21, 2013 @ 13:20:12
You Momma is a brilliant writer, no criticism here, just praise!
Jul 21, 2013 @ 15:17:19
That was a great article, Mom! Good for you branching out, and expanding your writing skills. You did a great description of that park and if I were ever in the city I would want to see it in person. If I worked there, I would eat my lunch there also! I could not get your “wind sprints with charley” article. I was able to read it in my email, but now I don’t even see it on here? Thanks!
Jul 21, 2013 @ 15:26:00
Thanks for your comments! I made a mistake with posting my wind sprints article, it will go up on Wednesday. Sorry for any confusion!
Jul 21, 2013 @ 16:39:44
Mommy is VERY impressed with your article and left you a comment over there. Sure is a beautiful place.
Hugs,
Lily Belle & Muffin
p.s. If you ask Muffin and I, yes, it could ALWAYS be about dog’s 🙂
Jul 21, 2013 @ 16:51:16
Maybe you can sneak in a dog mention? We will have to check it out!
Your Pals,
Murphy & Stanley
Jul 21, 2013 @ 18:49:32
this is very cool! I started my vintage blog to have an outlet for my non dog related interests and I think its good we all have so many different things we know about. I now have this untapped acre on my must see list
kate
Jul 21, 2013 @ 22:30:03
What nice non-dog writing (and photos) your mom does, Finn. I got super sucked in since the Elevated Acre is one of my favorite places in NYC (I lived in very near there) and I finally saw “The Great Gatsby” last night so those gold coast mansions are freshly fascinating. Thanks so much for sharing! I look forward to reading more of your mom’s articles.
Jul 21, 2013 @ 23:49:40
Nice! How cool
Benny & Lily
Jul 21, 2013 @ 23:53:08
That’s exciting! We will enjoy following your work!
Wyatt’s mom
Jul 22, 2013 @ 05:04:25
Wow, we will go take a look, that’s so cool xx00xx
Mollie and Alfie
Jul 22, 2013 @ 05:57:42
Excellent job on the article. Love the picture today!
Jul 22, 2013 @ 12:20:11
That is great news! Your momma did a wonderful job on the article!
Very cool!
Stewey
Jul 22, 2013 @ 20:39:39
Congrats!!!!
Jul 22, 2013 @ 21:53:48
I’ll definitely pop over and read your article! Good for you!
Jul 22, 2013 @ 21:58:55
Loved the article and will definitely explore this site more. The app sounds very cool!
Jul 22, 2013 @ 23:32:10
Loved the article…and think I’ll have to download the app!!
Jul 23, 2013 @ 00:03:55
Great article! I went to SUNY Albany too 🙂
Jul 23, 2013 @ 05:50:06
GO DANES!
Jul 23, 2013 @ 17:44:53
I meant to come back and comment on this! I read the article and enjoyed it very much. No criticisms from me!
Jul 24, 2013 @ 05:50:08
I read your article and I think it is fantastic! I felt compelled to download the app, and did! Excited to use it! Great job!!
Jul 24, 2013 @ 12:25:34
Awesome! Let me know about a walk it took you on!